Revision: What are you going to do?

Using my feedback, the reading and suggestions of others at your table and your own rereading--
what needs to change in your argument to make it a stronger text?

1. Will you revise the content or organization of your paper?
2. Do you need more evidence?
3. What kind?
4. Do you need to change the type of text?
5. Do you need to swap your voice?

Share what you are doing to revise your text for your audience below.